tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8464201653179922615.post2516312149307923563..comments2023-06-16T07:21:59.344-04:00Comments on Jacqui's Room: Back to the drawing board...Jacquihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08277260387578439327noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8464201653179922615.post-75617728968876254082009-07-22T17:12:30.025-04:002009-07-22T17:12:30.025-04:00Oh,ha! Could it be she just was in a bad mood?
M...Oh,ha! Could it be she just was in a bad mood?<br /><br />My daughter used to tell me she didn't like Hop! Plop! because it didn't have enough characters, but I think she was just exerting her power :)Corey Schwartzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03883689227283545602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8464201653179922615.post-57657027071073734922009-07-21T22:42:27.745-04:002009-07-21T22:42:27.745-04:00cath c, that is sweet. I hope Tink still is willin...cath c, that is sweet. I hope Tink still is willing to read my writing when she's older.<br /><br />Mary, I know. Honest and discerning is better. It was the "it's so bad I'll just sit here and say nothing" that got me.<br /><br />Ann, is that a prophesy? I hope you're right.Jacquihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08277260387578439327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8464201653179922615.post-26407743748892589342009-07-21T17:44:25.402-04:002009-07-21T17:44:25.402-04:00i discovered a long time ago, i can't trust my...i discovered a long time ago, i can't trust my own kids for critique on my writing.<br /><br />although i printed up a couple of copies of my ms just before the boys left for their dad's and my eldest, said, 'oh, i am definitely bringing THIS!' as he grabbed one made me giddy. then i promptly grabbed it back and told him he could read it here, when he returns.cath chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07121005007284461511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8464201653179922615.post-48603793196700383782009-07-21T17:37:04.336-04:002009-07-21T17:37:04.336-04:00My heart goes out to you; this happens to me a lot...My heart goes out to you; this happens to me a lot too. I tell myself that the good news is that I have kids who are honest and discerning (sigh). My kids talk about story arcs, characterization, and obvious plot devices. I wish they wouldn't, really.Mary Witzlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06458299046574564155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8464201653179922615.post-54724865805886006882009-07-21T10:02:11.206-04:002009-07-21T10:02:11.206-04:00Ooooooh. The next reincarnation, draft, idea will ...Ooooooh. The next reincarnation, draft, idea will be a winner.Ann Finkelsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01505478203827894237noreply@blogger.com